Feedback

After finishing our music video the other groups in our class watched it and gave us feedback...

Performance & lip-syncing

• Performance has something to be desired, not very varied and the whole room shot isnt great- too many overlaps.
• good overall lip-sync and performance, not to keen on the close up of mouth
• performance and lip sync REALLY REALLY GOOD- we liked the close up on the mouth
• Lip-syncing was really good, performance worked really well, liked that there was only one person in the band.
• Fine

Relationships between music and Visuals

• I don't see many- same faces. Performance quite impressive & convincing but perhaps the wrong shots used at the wrong time occassionally
• Sort of vaguely related to song, but not very obvious.
• Shots cut in time very well. 'Friends are False'- fake doll, very clever.
• Clear to see the fake doll related to theory, also theres only one performer.
• Friends are false, good relation, thats all.

Camera Work

• Varied shots occassionally but in general not enough. Performance a little dull.
• Good, few odd shots- close ups on people not as good as instrument ones.
• Love the band split screen
• Lot of different shots, repetitive, some quite long
• Good outside of bedroom

Editing

• Acceptable but needs better timing. Shots go on to long.
• Too many repeated shots- fades dont really suit the song. The white shot is to long.
• Yeah.
• Some shots are too long.
• Should have been tighter in the bedroom

Special Effects

• Video overlap perhaps not needed, to much movement for it
• Good except the cutting off the bass, however great idea.
• Yeah
• Only black and white shot
• Erm.. bizzle

Mise-en-scene

• Confusing, no real story or anything, its a bit random. Too little narrative, some shots repeated?
• Good costumes. Some random locations? Props good- doll is awesome
• Mmm
• Doll worked well
• Love the 'I love boobs' guitar

final cut screen grab